Stop Second-Guessing Your Scene!

You’ve done the hard work. You’ve checked all the boxes. Now it’s time to get clear, professional feedback from someone who knows the romance genre, so you know for sure what’s working (and learn how to strengthen what’s not).

Special Offer For New Clients!

I'M READY FOR FEEDBACK

Timely Feedback + A Chance to Ask Questions

What’s Included in the 1-Scene Edit:

  • Developmental feedback on your scene (up to 2,500 words)

  • Inline comments & suggestions + a brief editorial letter summarizing the feedback, including what I loved.

  • A 30-minute, 1:1 coaching call via Zoom, where I answer all your questions.

By the end, you’ll have:

  • Actionable next steps to make your scene shine

  • Clarity on what you’re already doing well

  • Confidence in your ability to tell a great story

  • Advice you can carry into the rest of your novel

  • Motivation and momentum to keep going on your manuscript

What to expect:

Submit your scene when you book. Within two weeks of receiving your pages, I’ll provide written feedback and a link to schedule your coaching call.

get my 1-scene edit

The 1-Scene Edit Is For You If:

You’re a romance writer.

  • You care about craft, character, and chemistry.

  • You thrive on happy endings.

  • Writing a good story matters to you — and you’re willing to do the work to make it shine.

  • You’re proud of your draft, but know it still needs work

  • You don’t want to waste time revising in circles

  • You need someone to help you zoom in on the right next steps

Whether you're writing contemporary or fantasy, spicy or sweet, I'm here to help.

Why Work With Me?

I’m an Author Accelerator certified book coach who specializes in romance. I know the genre inside and out. I won’t give you a one-size-fits-all strategy or overwhelm you with vague advice. Instead:

  • I tailor my coaching to you.

  • I help you build on your strengths.

  • I tell you what’s not working, and help you fix it.

  • You walk away with a plan that works for your book, your voice, and your goals.

let's do it!

  • "It was so wonderful to be able to talk about my story finally, to someone who cared to listen. It did make a huge difference! I'm working on a better external plot and I think I'm making it!"

    ~ Kriztina Rausch

  • "Jen has been wonderful to work with, her feedback was thorough and incredibly helpful, and she was a delight to chat with over zoom, too!"

    ~ Amber Sötemann

  • “I was struggling with my protagonist’s character arc, and Jennifer helped me understand how to incorporate his false belief into the story line. Suddenly the light bulb came on, and I began to see how to tie specific plot points not only to the external plot goal, but also to my protagonist's internal goal and use this to raise the stakes."

    ~ Mara Hurwitt

  • “Thank you for making my first coaching call (ever!) an enjoyable and productive experience!”

    ~ Angela Maniscalco

  • “Jen easily guides you to the right answer by having you look at your story through a different lens, maintaining your own voice and strengthening the story that is already in your head.”

    ~ Cora Flynn

This Is Not For You If:

🚫 You want someone to tell you your scene is already perfect
🚫 You’re looking for a magic fix
🚫 You aren’t interested in improving your writing

I can only help those who are open to feedback and ready to grow.

Finally Feel Confident in Your Story

With a 1-Scene Edit + Coaching Session

A $129 value, now just $47 for new clients*

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*You might be wondering, why the big discount? If it’s worth $129, why offer it for $47?

Here’s the scoop: I thought about making this less robust. And I thought about just charging $129 for this (because that’s what the investment should be if you do the math on the rest of my 1:1 coaching services). But, if you’ve:

  • Never experienced story coaching before,

  • Had a bad experience with an editor, or

  • Aren’t positive story coaching is the right thing for you,

I want to give you the full coaching experience with an investment that feels low-risk.

Still Have Questions? Book a Free Discovery Call